Mafhen Cil

Also can you please read this also:
          
          My short story:
          
          This is the link:
          
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/UYZeCche3N

Hello, can you check out my stories? Please?
          
          This is the link:
          
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/pJWB3w9d3N