chylamarie2011

Im writing a new story, but im not going to post it until i think i can actually focus a bit more on it... but i will give the prologue, and i just was wondering if i could get some feedback on what you guys think... 
          	
          		The year is 2016. Yeah, I know messed up right? Well, actually you don’t know why it is messed up yet, so here I am, going to tell you why this is all messed up. 
          		My name is Ashley, and I am 16. My mom and dad were two of many people to be sent away in 2013. You see, I was born it was 2000, y2k, what ever the hell you want to call it, and from my understanding it wasn’t the best of times then, but it was a whole hell of a lot better than it is now. When I was eight, president Obama, oops, I mean dictator Obama was elected as president, and after he was, everyone knew it was a bad choice. Then in the 2012 elections it was either Obama, or Sarah Palin, and of course, America wasn’t ready for a woman to be president so people voted for Obama again. Yet what people didn’t realize was that by voting for Obama, they were voting for even more Change, and not good change. Nope, quite the opposite. 
          		So here I am; 16, parentless, raising my baby sister, and leading the rebellion against Obama. And so now here’s my story, we will start at the beginning, from what my parents had written in their Journals about the world and everything. And then after we get past the kind of boring stuff, I’ll tell you about the rebellion, and how dangerous it is for me to be doing this.

maryasha

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          ☁ You made my day ☁
          
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          Thanks
          
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