@ciarakeller honestly about the dd thing being too accustomed to appeal to kids... I kinda agree. It's still enjoyable seeing Mackenzie getting bashed about as a character, but the language and plot is almost cringeworthy.
I know it's ridiculous at this point to self promote but... Please check out my prologue of my dd fanfic? I think it's more mature, but you're free to ignore this comment if I'm seeking too much attention lol. I won't mind, but I would love it if you do.
I've been checking out some of your books and they're awesome! I'm looking forward to read more :D