sunshinexreads1607

Hello 
          Are you interested in reading a book written by a Telugu author?
          
          A reluctant bride, a wounded heart, and a calm man who chooses patience over possession. 
          Married for convenience after being sacrificed twice for her family’s greed, she enters a third marriage carrying scars no one sees. He offers safety, respect, and quiet devotion—without knowing her past.
          
          This is a slow-burn tale of arranged marriage, emotional healing, and a love that waits… asking only one question:
          Can a heart that survived sacrifice finally choose happiness? ✨
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/402430920?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Nirvikawrites

cindrella1310

@sunshinexreads1607 Hello author, I'm following your book and it's quite interesting. I'm looking forward to read the following chapters.
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cj_wrts

Hey author. I've just started reading your story. Your story is good. But i would like to suggest you something. Please don't mind. As a reader and also as a writer I'm giving my feedback which will be helpful for your story. You should change your alignment of the words and there is no gap at all. It looks like a big essay. If it don't look clean and spacious we will loose intrest to read. Try to chunk it in small paragraphs. Highlight the font. I'm so sorry if you felt offended by my suggestion 

cindrella1310

@cj_wrts Thank you for letting me know my mistakes I'll try to improve myself.Once again thank you.
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