cindydikoume

Elpenor

What grammar mistakes do you think I made? I'm not seeing it. 
          
          And I hate writing straightforward, coherent, spoon-feeding poetry. That said, everything is related to the general idea and theme. I could break it down for you and prove it but I'd like to hear your thoughts on it first.

cindydikoume

I am not critiquing your poetry, don't get mistaken. I liked it but I just felt as if it was not coherent. I am not asking you to write "spoon-feeding poetry" as you call it, but I am just saying that your diction is not well used. and I would like to see more.
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