@TriniSimSim Thanks so much for the advice and thanks for reading as far as you did. The Elite was really just for fun and the first book I have ever attempted to write, so I know I have so much more to work on. To be perfectly honest, the fight scene was a let-down for me too because its something I'm not very good at. I tried a few times but never really flowed right so I just put it the way I did because I'd rather it be a let-down than absolutely rubbish. I might go back and re-write chapters, try to develop characters a little more and add in a few things about the Elite that I didnt put in originally but because it really was just for fun and nothing serious, I dont think so. Thanks again.