I'm a young writer trying to get better, so PLEASE criticize me on my work. How would I ever get better if I didn't know what to improve? I'm INTP and would like to be a cardiologist when i'm older. I have spheksophobia and lilapsophobia, and my favorite colors are orange and red. Most of my fanfics will be depressing, and if you know me personally from school or as family, uhh.... no you don't.