Hi. Just read your book ‘The Biker’s Healer’ and absolutely loved it. Shame it was so short as I was enjoying it so much. You created a very unique storyline and plot twists that definitely made it unpredictable which was great. So refreshing to read a biker story that’s truly unique. While it was shorter than most biker stories I’ve read, the detail of each characters personalities and and unique quirks was extremely well written and made them easy to connect with and feel reel (whether nice or nasty people). But mostly I loved the combination of these quirky characters and how you had them connecting and interacting on personal levels. It is also easy to see that this story has major potential to be a popular read. It just needs a bit more fleshing-out (I don’t really know how to describe it). Basically in comparison to other great biker book reads, they were longer in length with a more detailed storyline (like all the little things that happen in a day and the interactions with others). It would be good to read more about the massive emotional roller-coaster and awkwardness that both Angel and Beast would be experiencing from first meeting, embarrassing moments, small intimate moments plus the emotions of falling in love for the first time. Other stories do have greater detail with steamy moments but that’s obviously your choice. I guess it just kind of seemed to run fast from first meet to proposal and expected a bit more scared awkwardness from Angel rather than so totally trusting from first meeting all the guys. If any of that makes sense, you’ve been detailed in what you’ve written but it’s kind of like it’s a shortened version of the story with bits missing (so the story itself needs more detail/expanding on everything occurring around the main characters/even minor moment give a sense of it seeming truly realistic and typical everyday that’s relatable (hope that makes sense!). But absolutely loved it!
