Clairerue

Just updated chapter two changed it a lot and the title hope its better. Tried to take the advice that people said on the comments so please leave what you think

Ya totally would you mind telling me what you think in my book ? If so thanks 

Hey :) Mind checking out my book and possibly vote as well? Thanks lot if you do ^^

I am just started to write and didn't really have any ideas but then this one came up so I hope you like it please comment and tell me what I can work on and what you like. I will be updating soon.