clarelacey_

Unless anyone has anymore ideas to keep the story going I think I am going to leave it for a while sorry guys

chocholavacake

I put a comment with a lot of ideas on the other thing, pls go read it I love this book
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clarelacey_

Hey everyone I'm so sorry that I haven't written at all and I think I've lost my interest in writing the fanfiction I have right now but I would love to start writing another Harry Potter fanfiction and actually finish for you guys so if anyone has any ideas for a story please let me know and I will try my best to actually complete it this time

clarelacey_

I'm trying to add more to the next chapter in my story (The Dark Lady) but I have no ideas! I'm working on it, but if anyone has any ideas feel free to let me know

chocholavacake

Sry those are all the next chaptersssss**** of the book
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chocholavacake

Either, Have her talk to Draco about him being mean, because she keeps saying she’s upset, I think she is the type of person to act. Or you could have her defend the trio when Draco is teasing them, and then she could talk to hermione after she defends them, bc it kind of proves that she is not a mean slitherin, and then right after that could be a filler chapter where hermione helps her with reading and they develop their relationship. 
            
            Then you could have either the hogsmead trip thing, or filches cat is petrified.
            
            Then the next chapter after the cat thing she goes into the chamber to talk to her father, or she goes to Dumbledore and tells him about the father chamber thing.
            
            Next chapter hermione petrified. (And other ppl)
            
            Then next chapter she tells the trio about the chamber discreetly without saying it’s her father.
            
            Last chapter they go into the chamber together.
            
            
            
            There now there are a bunch of chapters all planned out, you just have to add details. Where I have done spaces are each a chapter idea
            
            
            
            
            That whole thing would be the next chapter of the book, I think it is a good place to pick up where you left off
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xxMissGallifrey

Here are all my ideas. You could have here speak with Lucius more in depth about her father or why she was sent away. You could also have her talk with Snape about her father. She could also have a duel with Lockhart. She could argue with Hermione to push her towards her father if you want her more on the edge between good and evil. 
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