clcstar15

Of course I'll read the new version excited to see what you change :) @PixieXW 

PixieXW

ok I know this isn't the best thing to have to do but I am going round all the people who read/ commented on the old Esperansa and- if it's what it takes- begging they might come back to me. I have inproved it to a point some bits are barely recognisable and even though it is roughly the same story I really want people to give it a try please!