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I tried to post a comment when I got through with chapter 14, but apparently Wattpad has deemed it offensive. (I guess it was, but I was putting down Tyler’s bullying actions.) So, in case it deletes it or doesn’t show you, I think Eve is a strong character, who isn’t at all “spineless” like Zack called her. Her family’s income greatly counts on Tyler’s dad’s cafe, not to mention what else that family could do to their lives with their wealth and influence on just a whim. Remaining silent when you want nothing more than to just scream in rage and frustration is a strength in itself.
            
            Also, I say we move to launch a scientific study into why people (guys in particular) think bullying and harming (whether it be physically or emotionally) the person they are interested in makes them more desirable, or will gain their favor. Someone punt Tyler in the Crown Jewels! 
            
            All in all, I am not finished with your story, but I find it well written, and the characters well done. Some people might not think them realistic, but that is untrue, as those types of people are very real. Personal experience.
            
            Keep up the excellent work! 

I have not read it just yet, it was on a late night binge of adding things I plan to read. I just finished another story, and I am going to start yours as soon as I send this! I am excited, it’s like an amalgamation of several of my favorite tropes.