Allelujah-Osiris

if you do have a laptop look on there at your programs go to search and look for Narrator i use that for a voice to read out to me, so many voices i use the Sonia she is a English United kingdom voice  i love how she sounds when she reads my story out to me

cloelutchman

@Allelujah-Osiris thanks a million.  I appreciate you. 
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Allelujah-Osiris

the program you need to use is wordpad i downloaded it i should be able to email it to you and use only ONLY!!!! wordpad ummm, another nice program is download a vlc video player i could probably email you that um and if u get that flashdrive, which im fixing to do now i changing my folder from book stuff to Writer's bible    here is another word from a movie 445. he gazes upon the cyborgs pale serene(calm, peaceful, and untroubled; tranquil) face - Alita Movie - the reaston for the vlc player is u can freeze the screen while audio description is going and load up on words or face expressions like Allelujah blinks wearing a forlornly(full of regret, loneliness, and even hopelessness) expression - DUNE

cloelutchman

@Allelujah-Osiris  well my character gets her wardrobe noticed in the 3rd chapter because she has to use an item to escape a place she got herself into 
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Allelujah-Osiris

fashion can be fun to a writer - i have so many from hairstyles, to makeup, hats pants, shoes, sunglasses. fannel shirts the list goes on. the readers wanna know what your character is wearing be that it a vampire, lycan, male, transgender, or a cyclops lolol here is a list 1980s feathered hairdo to neon eye shadow, to a poodle skirt, i have an abyss of material i collected over the years
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Allelujah-Osiris

do you have a laptop i do. I can help u create a word bank, the rest is up to you, um if u have a laptop get you two 200GB or 500GB u ll might be up at 2am or 4am in the  morning like me doing a fight scene or picking from my fashion folder on something for a charater to wear, as a write you have to be the eyes, for you reader, like control the weather, or have nuns whispering down the all about your main character.  ok a word bank when u get your flash drive make folder like me  called book stuff, put a folder in there name it word banks, browse a search engine or i could give u what i got but i would have to email it to you, for an example a picture of 2.  the teen doffs(remove an item or clothing) his right glove - DUNE this is from the movie dune - start buying dvds  of movies u love and look on the back and read and see if   it says audio description, put the movie in and go the options u ll get a ocean of details, one good movie i ll tell u is the cure for wellness  - DAMN good details, u might have to order off amazon or go to wal mart

cloelutchman

@Allelujah-Osiris I will check it out thank you. It may not be right away . The only time I get to write is at night . 
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Allelujah-Osiris

read through so of my story the southernbelle's curse - u ll see a lot of fashion in that like i said  u have to be the eyes for the reader
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CrimsonQuillz

Hi hi friend! I just wanted to ask how you're doing and how far you've gone with the generation of your book. Not meaning to impose but just wanted to ask based on concern from a fellow struggling writer. I know you might think I'm joking about being a struggling writer because of how far I've gotten in my story but that's not true. I just try my best and commit because of my love for it and that genuine joy you get when people enjoy the imagination you poured out in words just to share with them. Anyways, I really hope you have a breakthrough and come out with a fantastic story. I'll always be here supporting you. Happy writing! :)

CrimsonQuillz

@cloelutchman Awwww! I really understand your struggled. Literary because that's about the same I went through went starting up my story. But I'm always right here for assistance. Anyways, I'd love to send a link for my story but... unfortunately, I don't know how. But you can check my profile, you'll definitely find my story there. Happy writing!
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cloelutchman

@CrimsonQuillz  I did check your profile a little later and started reading your story . I like the way you write and honestly your story is alot more interesting and well written compared to some that I read on here . 
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cloelutchman

@Allelujah-Osiris  I'm trying . Hopefully it comes out well .
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CrimsonQuillz

Hi hi! Umm... I'm not sure how to put what I actually want to say into advising words but I guess I'll just say what is in my mind. Before I say anything, I saw a message you sent to the @Vampire page and I thought I felt the same. It's one reason why I decided to follow you. At least it should count as a small method of supporting you and your stories to come. I'm also writing a fantasy story. It's called 'Astoria's last Heir'. No one is perfect and I also struggle in writing too but if you ever need any tips or advise... well, though from what I read, I believe that is already taken care of. But still,  I'm always around:)

cloelutchman

@CrimsonQuillz thank you so much for this message . Sorry I had a little trouble with wattpad but its fixed now so hopefully I should be messaging a lot faster .  Again I'm so sorry for having you wait so long for a reply . 
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