Hey! Please give my book a try and recommend any changes if you can. I need someone to review it, but have no one, literally no one who can.
The Silent Thread
"The thread that never ties"
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"A longing not her own, a sorrow centuries old, and a name she had never spoken-yet had always known."
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Lord Gray was exiled for a crime he didn't commit and a love that was out of his control.
Natalie Deighton was killed for a love that was in her fate, a love which she couldn't avoid even if she reversed the time or changed her mind.
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Betrayed by love, deceived by power, and robbed of his throne, Lord Gray turned to the only force that could grant him justice-dark magic. He vowed that the lineage of the king who wronged him would be erased from history.
And so, the kingdom fell to ruin, abandoned under the weight of his curse. But vengeance came at a cost, for in death, he was denied both peace and punishment. Immortality became his prison.
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Sometimes, Primrose Thompson wakes up in the middle of the night with her cheeks wet, throat sore and her heart aching for a love which she couldn't understand, a love which wasn't hers, or was it?
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Thanks for reading the intro, and give my book a chance, you won't regret it. You can find it on my profile.
