clvssicwheeler

bec_01

Hey! I’m a new writer and I’d appreciate some advice on my new book! Thanks! :) 

bec_01

Aww my heart just exploded!! Thank you so much!!
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clvssicwheeler

@bec_01 so i read that first chapter of the book you made and it’s like- AMAZING. you honestly write better than i do, so my one suggestion is that you find a better author than me because my writing is tragic. if you need help finding authors to give you some good critiques and or advice, i STRONGLY suggest you go to @TOS-kah, her books are just 10/10, so maybe ask her about some things ? trust me, if you weren’t as talented as you are, i would’ve definitely given you advice, but i have none to give !! good luck on here, i’ll try to stay updated on your books ! ❤️
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clvssicwheeler

Me puse negro, me puse blanco, ¿qué quieres?
          Salta fuera de un Fantasma y salta en un Fantasma
          Sé que estoy a punto de explotar, oh, whoa, oh, no soy tonto
          Ellos tratan de tomar mi flujo, yo tomo su trasero por rescate
          Se que me he ido