@bec_01 so i read that first chapter of the book you made and it’s like- AMAZING. you honestly write better than i do, so my one suggestion is that you find a better author than me because my writing is tragic. if you need help finding authors to give you some good critiques and or advice, i STRONGLY suggest you go to @TOS-kah, her books are just 10/10, so maybe ask her about some things ? trust me, if you weren’t as talented as you are, i would’ve definitely given you advice, but i have none to give !! good luck on here, i’ll try to stay updated on your books ! ❤️