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Would readers be interested if I included some deleted scenes from the movies in my story?
I just watched the movies again on DVD, but the only one I have with me at the moment is the Voyage of the Dawn Treader
Sorry I haven’t posted much in Growing Pains, I’ve been busy plus I’ve been a bit stuck on what to write so I might end up skipping over those and coming back to them later so that I can still get content out
Leave idea suggestions for my Narnia story!
Anything works: fandom references you’d like to see, fairytales you like that would make a fun short story, alternate storylines like if something happened differently how would it go, songs you think I should reference, etc
feel free to leave ideas here or directly in the chapters of Growing Pains
Alright, I know it looks like I’ve abandoned Growing Pains, but I haven’t. I’m kinda hoping that maybe it’ll catch up in popularity to A Traitor’s Tale and maybe I’ll get some people interacting to help me out of my writers block for the section I need to finish before I can post the rest. If you’re seeing this and you have been reading or are interested in reading the second book, please do me a favor and leave comments with suggestions—literally anything… I’m starting to get a bit desperate here…
Hello! Thank you for adding "An Unexpected Return" to your reading list! Hope you enjoy it
Would anyone be interested if I wrote some “what if…?” Type stories into my Growing Pains book that follow what might/could have happened if something was different in the Narnia stories? I think it’d be fun to write about while including my characters as well but let me know what yall think
I just completed 'A Traitor's Tale,' and it was amazing. I loved every chapter. You wrote it so beautifully, and I love how you added more your original story. I personally enjoyed Golden Age the most. You put your own magic into this story, and I loved it. This is one of my favorite Edmund stories, and I would recommend it to everyone. I also love the way you add pictures and GIFs they really help with the imagination. I encourage you to write more original stories. Also, I would love to read more of Edmund's story Keep it up!
Thank you very much, I’m glad you think it was written well. I’d hate to be one of those authors who writes stories in texting speech (like brb lol u ur, etc) and so I tried to write it using language that made sense but wasn’t super uptight and posh I think I wrote it similarly to some of my favorite authors (Rick Riordan, Kerri Maniscalco, and Victoria Aveyard) while still writing in my own voice.
Now, you by no means have to read it, but I do have a second book that follows the same characters. I’ve been adding more lately to the Golden Age section because that was so fun to write with my own ideas instead of sticking to a script (which does make it quicker to write but it’s not as unique) I’ve been trying to update the book in a chronological order but I’ve been stuck lately between PC and VotDT so that’s why I’ve been going back and adding to the Golden Age. That book includes a mixture of points of view. The first one was entirely 3rd person, and there’s a fair amount of that in the second too, but I also included some first person perspectives. Characters like Ed and Jackie and Genevieve and a bunch of other original characters that are in those ‘mini’ stories more often. It’s been so fun getting to connect even more with my characters, especially Jackie because she’s my favorite (I wish I could be her)
I have added some more things to chapter ‘Five’ in the Golden Age and chapter ‘7’ in the Voyage of the Dawn Treader. I plan to add some more details and make adjustments accordingly for any bits I added or changed. It’s mostly to sort of establish the drama I have planned for a reveal in the second book (which is not going to be out for a while yet)
So I probably won’t be updating the second narnia story as much as I did before now that I’ve got college happening, but I’m not giving up on it. And when I do update it I won’t be putting gifs or pictures in until later because I left the computer I had been using at home four hours away from campus and my school one is a bit different when it comes to downloading stuff. But when I’m back home in November I’ll try to do some more of that updating and editing (but seeing as my birthday is in November on the day my classes end it might take a bit) I’d definitely appreciate any feedback or suggestions you might have for that story of things you would have liked to see in the first one.
My first Narnia story is officially done and I’ve published the companion novel with different short stories that were left out of the first one. Enjoy!
To anyone who has been reading my Narnia story, I’m almost to the end of it, already 5 chapters into the last part (Voyage of the Dawn Treader). If you’ve been following along, you know the struggle I’ve been having with writing this final section, but I think I’ve found a solution that hopefully will work. That being said, I really appreciate it when readers interact with my writing, especially when I make references to other fandoms I enjoy (Harry Potter, Marvel, Hamilton, Phineas and Ferb, etc) so if you also enjoy those things along with Narnia (and if you haven’t already) please check out my story or share it with someone else you think would like it