Ok, I've updated the first 6 chapters (I changed the Prologue into a Chapter 1, so up to the old Chapter 5). I took down the 2 chapters after because those require more extensive changing to fit my new story line. The biggest change is to the first part, now chapter 1. I added some details. The other chapters only have minor changes. That's FYI for anyone wanting to go back and reread the changes. I'm hoping to rewrite the next 2 chapters and post them by the end of the weekend, then we can get on with the story!