coco41687

@kingdomdance Your welcome

wholesomedotcom

Are you going to continue your BOOK OF RANDOMNESS? It's really good! :)

wholesomedotcom

That's as random as it gets.
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wholesomedotcom

I like turtles :)
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coco41687

@bosoxgirl Aww thanks, yeah I'm eventually going to update it but writer's block and school have gotten in the way. If you have any suggestions or ideas I'd be happy to hear them. 
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qwertyboburnham

Hey I need advice
          

qwertyboburnham

@Coco41687 ok but what If I kill off markiplier 
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coco41687

@qwertyboburnham I read your story and I like how you throw in all those people in together.......and I fangirled a little at the mention of Markiplier.
            
            Anyway I think you should maybe add a little drama and some tension maybe a death scene...a laughable death scene, for example, someone says something like:  "No, don't look at me, I'm not pretty when I die." then someone else says: "When have you died before?"   "In FNAF, that game is a pain in the butt."  But I think your story is good so keep it up! :)
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