Hey guys I wrote something for ELA and it was like a creative write and lmk if it's good or not!
I felt like I was burning in hell I couldn’t take it anymore, my skin felt as cold as ice, the moonlight seeping through the curtains, my thoughts running around in my head thinking "why?...why me?" I understood I deserved this pain it was the consequence of my sins and one day when I leave this world the people that I have caused pain and suffering to with my very existence will have a burden lifted off their shoulders, my heart was a empty box, I have been deprived of love my whole life I forgot what love even was…I tried so hard to be perfect for them but in the process of trying to be perfect I lost my true feelings I no longer feel emotions other then guilt and hate…. Hate for myself... Despair wrapped around my soul, suffocating in the silence of my shattered self.
Honest opinions please!
