jimbob22

I'm sorry for not updating my story within the past few days. I am waiting for critiques. Once I receive them, I will update.

For comments on my stories:
          If you comment something to critique my work, I will copy and paste your comment(s) into a private document that is meant for my viewing only. I take critiques seriously and I act on them, but I feel like if I acted on a critique, the comment is no longer relevant, so I will delete them from the comment board, however, they will stay in my private document for future reference.

I have a problem with Wattpad ambassadors confronting people about what they did wrong in discussion threads so that everyone else in the thread can see. Why don't they message the person directly / privately and talk to them about it instead of crowding the discussion posts even more and embarrassing the other user?

Hello everyone! I am finally serious about a story for once, but I would really like some feedback on it. If you wouldn't mind, please read and share my published story and leave some feedback in the comments (or feel free to message me privately). Thank you!