CalikaLe

So, hi!
          My first impression sa story is, masyadong mabilis? Then, yung sa unang chapter, parang di maganda na sinabi ni Pia na,'maganda ako' kasi parang unnatural yun sa character na magabi nun. Then, ingat din sa punctuation mo, spaces. Yun. Keep it up girl. Write, write lang.

SMmadnEsS

Hi! Thanks for the follow po! Dahil jan, malugod kitang inaanyayahan na mag-share ng iyong thoughts/advices sa on-going story ko na GIVE ME REASONS TO LIVE. Sana mapaunlakan mo, and I hope you enjoy reading my stories thanks!^_^
          
          SM❤

lucihorns

Hello!
          
          Are you interested in sci-fi/action genre of stories but ofcourse, with a little bit of romance. If you do, I would be glad of you give my story a try! Entitled: FLAKES. 
          Inspired by Disney princess, Snow White. Her adventures and misadventures fighting against the Evil Queen.
          
          May I remind you that votes and comments are allowed!
          
          Thank you! May you have a wonderful night/blissful day! :)
          
          Link 》 https://my.w.tt/9wiFT0BZsO

lucihorns

Hello!
          
          Are you interested in sci-fi/action genre of stories but ofcourse, with a little bit of romance. If you do, I would be glad of you give my story a try! Entitled: FLAKES. 
          Inspired by Disney princess, Snow White. Her adventures and misadventures fighting against the Evil Queen.
          
          May I remind you that votes and comments are allowed!
          
          Thank you! May you have a wonderful night/blissful day! :)
          
          Link 》 https://my.w.tt/9wiFT0BZsO