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Hi! I am a first time writer, would love to get your opinion on the first few chapters of my story. The story is a medical drama/romance about an immigrant doctor in the US. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/289681207-clash-of-cultures?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks

That was our friendship: equal parts irritation and cooperation.
          
          Ransom Riggs, 
          
          

So what? You're another person, so of course you look different. What do you need to be ashamed for?
          
          Yana Toboso
          
          

“Hold fast to dreams,
          For if dreams die
          Life is a broken-winged bird,
          That cannot fly.” 
          ― Langston Hughes

Ever been with a group full of boys and your the only girl.......long story short it sucks

I've been to school and survived I SHOULD HAVE AN AWARD

I hate how people blame society ..........You do realize that your apart of it

I HAVE A QUESTION
          
          
          
          
          AM I YOUR FRIEND BECAUSE I AM IN DESPERATE NEED OF ONE RIGHT NOW

All that is gold does not glitter,
          Not all those who wander are lost;
          The old that is strong does not wither,
          Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
          
          From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
          A light from the shadows shall spring;
          Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
          The crownless again shall be king.
          
          J.R.R. Tolkien
          
          

Thanks for your bio
          It just made my whole day better :-)