@conversesandsweats it would be great to know Will's POV through the whole thing if you wanted to add that to the story. It's a great way to know why did he do that and what were the circumstances that he was living in that got him to this point. Also I've just finished reading the first chapter of the book and so far so great. Your writing has improved really well and it's great that you've put the full story,forgive me but I don't really remember the whole thing since I've read it long ago but I've noticed the improvements and I remember the story as a whole but not the minor details but so far so great. Also you're reading my book? Thank you so much! Tell me what you think about it even if it's a stink bomb! I wouldn't mind it. And if you like my work I've published a new story called Devil May Cry you can check it out too! Btw if you're interested I'm doing a promo and I was wondering if you'd like any of your books to be featured in it. Go to my profile and find a book called Wattpad's New Incomers And Undiscovered,all information and how to enter is right there. Better stop babbling! Have a nice day and don't forget to SMILE!!! Thanks again! <3
