cookiesandmuffins
@TheOrangutan hi. but I wanted the author of this story to see mine and tell me what I could improve upon it...I'm not advertising my story just wanting feedback from an experienced author of Wattpad...is that too much to ask?
TheOrangutan
I'm afraid if you're asking folk to read your story it comes across as advertising. If you're looking for feedback check out the Improve Your Writing club.
Just 'cos a person is featured does not mean they have the time or inclination to help a newbie I'm afraid, there are far better places and methods to try and get constructive critique
