cooldude99by

So now that we're into 2025, I believe I should ask, any thoughts on what you might want to see in the RWBY X warframe story?  Obviously there's going to be several story changes and more added that weren't in the previous story.  Still only having a few warframes but adding much more weapons owned. Might not get to use all of them, but for the moment, ideas are welcome.

Lilspooky201

@cooldude99by Still new to Warframe. I only got back into it after playing it since 2016. But I look forward to seeing what you come up with the story
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starwars582

Can I ask you an important question about your Star wars book

Lilspooky201

@cooldude99by Yeah I remember reading a clone wars comic where Aayla and Commander Bly and a few other Jedi had to fight an army of Clones of a species that could go head to head with the Jedi. So there's a lot of stuff from Star wars legends and canon that is enough content
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cooldude99by

And they will, theres plenty more from comics and starwars clone wars show and revenge of the sith to show.
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Lilspooky201

@cooldude99by Got it thanks for responding,and the first half of the story we were half way through the first year of the war and the second half of the story we were through the second year of the war and now we're half through that and I know the war is gonna last a little bit longer cause I remember you saying that you have your own storylines you want to tell which is great and I will always stand by this The Clone wars should have lasted longer especially with the war being on a galactic scale
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cooldude99by

So now that we're into 2025, I believe I should ask, any thoughts on what you might want to see in the RWBY X warframe story?  Obviously there's going to be several story changes and more added that weren't in the previous story.  Still only having a few warframes but adding much more weapons owned. Might not get to use all of them, but for the moment, ideas are welcome.

Lilspooky201

@cooldude99by Still new to Warframe. I only got back into it after playing it since 2016. But I look forward to seeing what you come up with the story
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cooldude99by

Thought I would put it out there, but there is only eleven chapters that are unfinished, the ending of book 1 is close to wrapping up with chapters from then to the present still been completed. There are only two chapters in the season 5 timeline that needed work on, the other nine are mostly drafts and are subjected to change. I've also kinda made the poster for the second book, but I'm not sure on it's design since it's AI. Maybe better than stealing an image of the internet and simply giving it a title and a bad background.
          
          My focus will go into the Warframe/Rwby remake book, The book will take a different approach to the OC since much wasn't established in the og book until much later in the volumes.  The past of the Tenno is explored much more, and although there's newer updates to the story about warframe, I am going to attempt to keep with the original way I intended it to go with the volume seven and eight parts. Each Volume will at least have eight or more chapters, so expect some filler chapters or chapter building on each relationship with Team RWBY.

cooldude99by

@cooldude99by uh, Y/N would not have met Lana in the current story, only marr due to a certain event in his life. I look into whay i can do with the suggestion
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Gazimus_Prime

I want you to make sure they react to marrs quote.
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Gazimus_Prime

@cooldude99by I also want to point out in one of these chapters the male reader should tell his harem about Darth marr the honourable and Lana beniko who could be like a big sister for our main character who was part of the reason his force attacks are that good.
            I would love to see their reaction to Darth marr who was very different from the average sith and taught our main character discipline and made him a warrior with honor who also one time teamed up with satele Shan and they both even had mutual respect for each other.
            
            I think at one point out main character should find Lana beniko and Darth marrs sith holocrons and their unique perspective on life and teachings guiding our main character.
            Also about his quote from a famous edit 
            "The will of the force is a flowing current you can follow or fight it, .....but it is always there. "
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cooldude99by

Okay, so I need a few voices to give me some clarity, I want a good star wars reawakening book two, but to do that, I need to change the cannon star wars time line. I've tried to keep as close as I could possibly can with the timeline, but with their only been three whole years (maybe some months as well on top of that) In the entire war, I can't create the piece of writing I want to since book 2 doesn't really lead into the original trilogy (That doesn't imply our character dies by then by the way, just that there's more to it). I haven't finished book one yet, but I know how it ends, and how book 2 starts as well. (still no ending I like, rip me I guess) Book two is gonna be more than 100 chapters long, maybe even equaling book one's amount of chapters to equalize the length, but back on topic, I need to change the clone war progression and make it longer than it is.
          
          I only want to know people's thoughts, since I've made already story descriptions for several chapters in book 2. And some leads down into the books own lore, different stories to tell, different appearances, other OC character and so much more. I could throw in a plot that makes the war take long which will take some time since I'm still thinking of how Y/N would discover Sidious (if he does in time) And since there's going to be a much more larger plot, nothing to say here other than I appreciate anyone's time for feedback.

Lilspooky201

@cooldude99by yeah and if it helps you introduce new characters to the story then go for it and to be honest with you I just want the war to last a little bit longer
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cooldude99by

@Lilspooky201 definitely seems to be going a little longer then
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Lilspooky201

@cooldude99by hey man I know I'm late to see this response but It's alright if you don't follow cannon. If it helps with your story go for it. Also I think the war should last a little bit longer especially if it helps your story and to be honest with you I always thought the clone wars should have lasted a bit longer like    5 or 6 years like WW2
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kybus24

love your work dude and I wanted tell about one idea that could be use in main book or one shot:  here is link i sent:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4zF2QFGSAyc its darth vader + troops dance thriller , I imagine Y/n and his troops dance and all jedis, mandalorians and rest troops see them dance, no force off course but it could be funny.

kybus24

thank you dude, love your work
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cooldude99by

@kybus24 ill look into making a one shot possibly
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cooldude99by

Will be releasing the mext chapter this Friday, i have been away from wattpad for most of the month trying to figure my life out. I am working on two one-shot chapters with clones involved. One more calmer than the other. There's also the rwby story, which i still need to work on, getting there with volume 2. Other than thay, not mich has been done.

cooldude99by

@Bourbon56 definitely something to look forward to.
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Bourbon56

@cooldude99by Even more intrigued with the whole Maul Death Watch Arc :)
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Bourbon56

@cooldude99by Honestly mate, take all the time you need. You never fail to disappoint :)
            
            Though I would be lying if I said I wasn't interested in how Y/n, will take Barriss' bombing attack
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Excusemeh_aj5

Hey man hope you’re having a good day(or night) thanks for the vote and comment on the story. I have a question would you be okay if I titled my story “A Jedi’s Reawakening” been thinking about changing the story just wanted to know if that was okay with you?

cooldude99by

@Excusemeh_aj5 It is no problem mate, basically a jedi version of my story just with a lot of changes. I'm all for it, besides it's catchy.
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