JNightshade328

Hi Cooler,
          
          Just wanted to swing a idea which came to mind.
          
          How would you feel if I rewrote Origins? Because after a bit of thought I realise that the story could have progressed a little faster, with a bit more rescues and crimefighting instead of the politics and the slow development. 
          
          Or have you settled with the original version? 

cooler9

Hello that cool idea change story but I Ike original story more buut I think you should do what you do 
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Alanthomasjk

Hi cooler9.....
          You might know me from Glum to Glory....
          Thanks for the votes and positive comments...
          Hope you'll stay till the end...
          Feel free to share any suggestions....for the current story or future stories.
          

cooler9

Hi I happy to share this and don’t worry I going stay with you to end and thank for share with me is, If i know any suggestions with story  i going tell you when I get ideas and sill glad for you 
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