coolgirl1700

Time to find motivation and start writing this story 

Cookies1475

@coolgirl1700 Omg I didn't see this till just now. I'm blushing. . . thank you so much! I'd say the same about you! ♥
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coolgirl1700

Tyyyyyy! You are so nice I don’t deserve it 
          	  Your replies to my comments make me feel appreciated, and every time I just smile because your a great author and nice person in general from what I’ve seen. <3
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Cookies1475

Hellooooo!! How are your books coming along?

Cookies1475

haha! it's not as bad as it sounds lol. I was in my last year, and I had to work.
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coolgirl1700

@Cookies1475 i don’t know if i should laugh or be concerned 
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Cookies1475

Cool! Yeah I forget that other people have school lol-- I had to drop out haha!
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coolgirl1700

Time to find motivation and start writing this story 

Cookies1475

@coolgirl1700 Omg I didn't see this till just now. I'm blushing. . . thank you so much! I'd say the same about you! ♥
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coolgirl1700

Tyyyyyy! You are so nice I don’t deserve it 
            Your replies to my comments make me feel appreciated, and every time I just smile because your a great author and nice person in general from what I’ve seen. <3
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coolgirl1700

Help, I want to make a story that is a zombie apocalypse, but I can't find a proper plot. All I know is I want it to be Zombies, BL, and Poly. Please share some ideas.

Cookies1475

@coolgirl1700 me too lol. Bye for now!
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coolgirl1700

Thanks! I hope your power gets back on as soon as possible :D
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Cookies1475

Hey! I know you said you didn't like the title for your book. I can't really help you because I don't know the plot and feel you're going for-- (only the author should lol), but I can give you a little tip. Sometimes, if I'm stuck and can't find a title I like, I find a title generator. You can just write a little synopsis of important details or moments, or the theme and characters of your book, and it will give you options! I NEVER use the names it gives me, since they're usually far from what I want, BUT,  they are great at giving you IDEAS for titles. Play around with it until you come up with one you like. All the love, and Happy New Year!♥♥♥

coolgirl1700

@Cookies1475 I will try that thanks! Happy New Year!
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Cookies1475

Little bit of advice-- (please don't hate me:(  )  You descriptions are amazing, but the flow of timing needs a little work. Just try to take your time and really write out your scenes; I know it feels super long while writing it but when you read it becomes much shorter. So take your time to show inter-actions, like describing time passing or going through doors if you're leading to another scene. Otherwise, your book is amazing!

coolgirl1700

@Cookies1475 Thanks for the advice, it’s much needed. I asked my brother to kinda proof read it and he told me to make it less wordy so to speak. But now I know that the descriptions are needed for the flow of the story. I’ll probably rewrite the chapters to make them more to my liking as well. I’ll take all these things in mind when I write the next chapters. Thanks!
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Cookies1475

Hey, sorry to keep bothering you lol, but I posted a part in Wren, asking for people to vote on a name. Could you skip down to that part and help out lol? It won't spoil the story or anything, I just haven't gotten enough feedback and the time limit is running out. The part is titled 'Help Me Choose'.

Cookies1475

@coolgirl1700 That'd be super helpful. thank you!
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Cookies1475

Hey, real quick, I'm working on a story right now. I need a quick throw-away name for a male character. Any recommendations lol?

coolgirl1700

@Cookies1475 Ruben? Idk it’s was my moms coworkers name and the first that came to mind 
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Cookies1475

Hello, this is the author of 'Bury the Shadows'. Thank you for all your votes! I hope you like how the story continues, and if you do, let me know! You can also check out my other stories on my profile page. I'd especially recommend 'Wren'. Have a great day!

Cookies1475

cool. anyway, I'll let you go lol. Have a good night!
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coolgirl1700

@Cookies1475 I see. I’ll check it out for sure. 
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