coolstorybrosephs

howdy
          	

samirahdelor

Hello there :)
          I've just uploaded a story on wattpad
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/17784465-the-bad-boy-the-player-and-me
          And it will mean alot to me if you gave me your feedback and critiques, this will help me improve my story.
          If you could share your opinions and probably point out my mistakes. I'm not an experienced writer but I do it for fun and it'll mean alot to me if you checked it out and probably leave a vote if its good enough ;) wink wink* nudge nudge*
          
          But it will leave me on top of the world if you checked it out and left me your advice, this will help me improve my writing skills.
          I update often so if you like it than you could add it to your reading list so it can inform you when it's updated.
          
          Your story is heading to a great direction. Update soon!

TheOrangutan

If you wish to advertise, please do so via the Share Your Story threads at the top of the discussion boards in the Genre clubs not on other people's stories. Thank you.
          
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IvanaMici

I like your story,but honestly,the chapters are a little too short,maybe you should add few more details + at the beggining the girl says that she`s with the guy,so maybe you should write that they`re friends...Its a good story,wish you luck xx

coolstorybrosephs

thanks ivan a, peace and blessing
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