Hello to anyone who responds, just use this to give any feedback/comments on my writing as a whole. I want the good, bad, and the ugly, what I really want is to improve as a writer so it would be very helpful if you can just tell me what I did poorly and what I do well. Remember if you want to tell me about something specific to a poem/story or whatever do that in the comments below the chosen story/poem you are commenting on. This conversation is for suggestions and complaints on my writing style as a whole.
