Leigh19

Saying Goodbye
          
          There's a girl- Ali
          There's 2 brothers- Nick and Riley
          There's a dad who beats his daughter
          There's a rich dangerous dad who wants his oldest son to follow in his footsteps
          Nick helps Ali cope with her life
          They fall for each other despite the problems their love brings
          ONLY he's not the only one who loves her.
          Another brother secretly loves her.
          Nick dies....or does he?
          Ali mourns his death in dangerous ways and ends up falling
          BUT what if falling meant you were betraying the one you loved?
          WHAT IF some BIG life altering secret came out exposing everyone you trusted?

Lets_Hi5

Hiya:]
          I'm new and just wrote a story for the Watty Awards
          and was wondering if you could read it.
          Its called Unholy Matrimony
          and its basically about a girl who gets taken into the underworld where she has to compete with other human and nonmortal girls for the place as queen of the underworld. There is action, romance, and humor (I hope lol!). So please could you read it, eh?