cosmicplunder23

Got the first chapter for my revision of revenge curse of the eliments please do tell me what you think

cosmicplunder23

As of today I've decided since I started rewriting the revenge again I might take the finished version down. Sorry for the inconvience if there is some one that's reading it. But I want to rewrite it. I do have a new chapter that will be published 

cosmicplunder23

I will be writeing a new story called the cutthroats, essentially the story is about a band of pirates who go to great lengths to kidnap a boy who has unimaginable powers that the captain feels could be a useful asset to his crew. But he latter finds out when the boys full potential is released he can't control it and he will destroy any thing or any one that comes with in a 1 mile radius of him. I'm looking forward to writeing this story. Have a good and pleasent day.

cosmicplunder23

Ok so the revenge was the first book I ever wrote, I'm sorry if there is any errors in the revenge. Also on another note I have two more books with one chapter published please do feel free to give any feed back of what you think needs fixed I'm open to constructive criticism. Have a pleasant day  

lunacailin

Hello! ^_^
          
          Thank you so much for adding 'Asian Face Claims' to your reading list. I really appreciate it and hope you like the book.♡ 
          
          Have lovely days~ :)

lunacailin

@Gigglesred12 Tysm! ❤️❤️❤️ 
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cosmicplunder23

@londoncailin in my opinion your writeing is fantastic your points are clear keep up the good work
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