hey kayla :)
just read your story up to the ninth chapter ...this story has great potential though here and there it could use some improvement (i might explain that in a comment later on)
in you about me you said, that you love to read and wouldn't mind reading someone elses story so i'll be so bold and advertise my story here ;)
it's "The Prophecy-When Darkness Comes" and it's in the process of being edited and changed, so if you have any advice for me while reading or suggestions just go ahead and say so and i'll consider it while changing the story =)
oh and if you are looking for some really awesome books (and poems^^) go to my reading list "favorites (finished reaading)"... i think some of the books i added to that list can even be considered some of the best books on wattpad
thanks in advance and nice to meet you =)
the
one and only
Lady of the Night
^_^