cpjmom

@angel37: Just did.  Thanks.

Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

The_Angel_Azrael

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maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it 
           
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls  
          
          Synopsis:  
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that. 
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls 
          
          Please read the first two chapters before you decide if you want to continue reading it or not :3