Hello, I know this is a long shot and it's not meant to be rude at all, but I was wondering if I could edit primal for you. I know you said you've already edited it, but I'm afraid it's full of grammer and spelling mistakes, overexplining that takes away from the story, and run an sentences. If you want we can talk on another app if this interests you. I really love the story, it's just difficult to read, and I find myself changing sentences in my head so they make sense. Again not meant in a rude way at all! Thank you for writing!
