creepypasta_cheyenne

Hey guys sorry for being away for so long. But I'm bbbaaaaccckkk. Sorry for all that stuff that was going on with my creepypasta: gas mask story but I have fixed that problem. Thank you guys so much for reading my storys.

creepypasta_cheyenne

 I have made a new story. please check it out and read it. let me know what you guys think about it. its called Creepypasta: Gas Mask

ImDoneSorry

@creepypasta_cheyenne I like it keep go even if you lazy I accept it
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usernameLucasistaken

@creepypasta_cheyenne  I just read the first chapter of your story and...... I thought it was one of the dumbest, laziest, most unoriginal, most bland pieces of throw away trash I have ever seen.
            
            First off, don't stop the story to describe your oc unless it's to help progress the story. For example " as I walked through the forest, rain spattered on my glasses and soaked my brown hair,"
            
            Secondly, DON'T BRING UP OTHER CREEPYPASTA CHARACTERS INTO YOUR CREEPYPASTA! ESPECIALLY IF YOU'RE TRYING TO WRITE A LEGITIMATE HORROR STORY!
            
            Thirdly, your oc is bland, dumb, spoiled and, most of all, uninteresting.
            
            Finally, don't write your dialogue like this
            Mary Sue: * insert dialogue*
            Jeff: *insert dialogue*
            
            It shows laziness and how little effort you put into writing a story.
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