crimson-and-noir

OK just to keep in touch with my wonderful readers, I know I haven't posted a chapter since January (but I did put up like 3 chapters in a month) but I am halfway done with chapter 8, its way longer than other chapters and I am putting a lot of effort into it. I am currently not with my laptop, I'm on spring break but I am buying a new laptop soon and chapter 8 will probably be up before April 2nd.

crimson-and-noir

OK just to keep in touch with my wonderful readers, I know I haven't posted a chapter since January (but I did put up like 3 chapters in a month) but I am halfway done with chapter 8, its way longer than other chapters and I am putting a lot of effort into it. I am currently not with my laptop, I'm on spring break but I am buying a new laptop soon and chapter 8 will probably be up before April 2nd.

JoeDowning

you are the writer, do what ever you want with Jeremy. its your choice. but I agree with the rest, you don't have to write his dating life. but I bet that your a good enough writer to get the emotions right. that's all we want. a stronger storyline. a whole book about a girl's mom dying to cancer. dads new girlfriend. adopted little sister. youtuber. best friends falling in love. young teacher, coma. depression. prom. grad, highschool. Italian. this story has almost everything, but its missing 1 thing and its a new conflict. chapter 7 and nothing new except for nick admitting his feelings