crimson_red

thank you @mushroom_Tori i just corrected my mistake :P Thanx for following my story :)

mushroom_Tori

heya! >o< lol!
          i only have one little mistake, sorry! only one though. 
          your grammar throughout is amazing!!!
          it is 'the TV is on' not the 'TV is open'
          i'm so sorry, but your an amazing writer!!!!!
          best wishes,
          me!!!!!!
          XD
          im so gonna follow lol!!