Leann Smith

"The story of our lives" I haven't really gotten very far on it but I'd rather not start off heading in a bad direction. Thank you for the help!

"That Night" critique it, i know you'll be honest and i'm looking forward to your comments.

http://www.wattpad.com/652688-earth-my-body-magickal-celtic-witches
          
          Earth My Body, Magickal Celtic Witches 
          
          Following the tragic death of her mother, Ashlyn discovers her family's sacred magickal past. These secrets take her to Ireland where she must attend a school that will teach her to manipulate her newfound skills and supernatural abilities for good versus evil.