crouton_crispy

I have come back from the dead! I am continuing my book again, “Not so Ordinary Lives” I hope you would support this book as you did the last version!

crouton_crispy

And to all my readers, I would like all of your guys opinions on how you like my story and or how you would like me to fix it!! I’ll try my very best to fix it to your likings!! I appreciate all impute and am insulted by none, So feel free to ask for anything!! Thank you!!

crouton_crispy

Thank you for your imput!! I know I shouldn’t have favorite characters but Alex is my favorite with how shy he is ❤️ And don’t worry your perfectly fine with commenting!!
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QRwater

@_DeathShade_ 
            I like the interaction between both Alex and Ash.
            I find it kinda of cute how bold Alex can be when he is with Ash compare to how shy is normally is.
            Their interactions is very funny and cute.
            I like how the story is so far.
            I don't know what to say for improvement or what to fix.
            But so ideas, could be writing the point of view of other characters like Ash mother and how she think or on Alex.
            Sorry, I not good with commenting.
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crouton_crispy

Sooooo, I love how I was just scrolling through my notifications, 5en I look and see someone voted for my story, Why is it that the first thing I think is “Huh? A human being actually read my story?!”  Thank you for that @acusha123

QRwater

@_DeathShade_ I believe that there are more reader reading. 
            Also thank you for writing.
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