crwumble_

Heyyy guys! I think I have just been through a point where I started to be curious about my thought process and writing so I was thinking a LOT. I think after that, I probably made improvements in my writing. I feel like it’s more smooth because I decided to add a lot of details into Jin’s thoughts and the way he is. I added like more personality to his inner voice to the chapter I’m writing now. You’ll probably see more improvements in the future. And of course, constructive criticism is welcomed  thanks

crwumble_

Heyyy guys! I think I have just been through a point where I started to be curious about my thought process and writing so I was thinking a LOT. I think after that, I probably made improvements in my writing. I feel like it’s more smooth because I decided to add a lot of details into Jin’s thoughts and the way he is. I added like more personality to his inner voice to the chapter I’m writing now. You’ll probably see more improvements in the future. And of course, constructive criticism is welcomed  thanks

crwumble_

So I’ve been working on the next chapter for the last two weeks. It’s because of school and I just moved houses too. I think imma finish it like this week, hope you enjoy it. It took longer than I expected cuz I wanted to plan a little.