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@norhannero2018 sure

@norhannero2018  Read STEAM AND SMOKE BY @Nyx_ssa

@norhannero2018 hey I have read so far the story i loved it ...there are some gammer mistakes but you will pass when you write some more stories...tip 1. Whenever you write conversation btw characters then use these "conversations" .
            2. Most of the time only add pov of character not nobody cause some readers may have problems understanding the story's pov .
            3.Grammer improvement 
            4.d not underline conversation.
            And All above loved the story line ..❤️ keep it up