@crystalcriz i read that too but let me be honest with you, your idea, the plot, everything was perfect but in comparison to "awestruck" and "holding on", I might not give it much points because the separation between them that was led due to kth being a navy, the longing all made my heart hurt in a way.. The fact that his son couldn't even recognize him, the fact that he again left for his job even though he'd come to meet them frequently still there still was an uncertainty that I felt... But I assure you, as a writer you did great <3..