crystalcriz

Hi , this is crystalcriz. Thanks for following and do give my ffs a try if you like them !

Min_Mi_Cha_XY

@crystalcriz oh lol it's only Holding On. Damn MY EYES 
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Min_Mi_Cha_XY

@crystalcriz I'm currently reading one of them and already liking it :) it's a v ff..... Holding on me or something is the name hehe
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rwyffixhippc

@crystalcriz i read that too but let me be honest with you, your idea, the plot, everything was perfect but in comparison to "awestruck" and "holding on", I might not give it much points because the separation between them that was led due to kth being a navy, the longing all made my heart hurt in a way.. The fact that his son couldn't even recognize him, the fact that he again left for his job even though he'd come to meet them frequently still there still was an uncertainty that I felt... But I assure you, as a writer you did great <3..