SummerMelodie

Hey there! Just wanted to thank you for your constant support on my book Concealed. It really means a lot <3

SummerMelodie

@SummerMelodie I'll be sure to check the doll master out in time. Also, yes, it's disappointing that wattpad algorithms get tricked into promoting stories that are a mess when it comes to plot/grammar and there's nothing we can do about it. I'm doing the best I can and the only way to reach a greater audience is a feature on wattpad's recommendation,  or the sharing of my book by current readers to other readers. Hopefully Concealed will see some success.  
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crystallocks

@SummerMelodie @SummerMelodie You're welcome. But, really, I should be the one thanking you! I really love reading this fic....... I still can't understand why you don't have more following. I don't mean any offense to others, but I've seen many other fanfics(not well written or engaging) getting so much more following. I really didn't mean this in a negative way, that's just what I think. 
            I prefer wattpad's format, but I can never find books or fanfics that are as well written and interesting(I read BTS and Harry Potter fics usually) as some other fanfics that I read on ao3. 
            One other underrated fanfic that I read on wattpad was "тнє ɗσℓℓ мαѕтєя" by Luvaracci. It is BTS x Reader. This is really one of the best fanfics that I've read on wattpad. I really recommend this one. It's not completed, but I love it very much!
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Jglh23

Hi.  This is Jaygwen23 from AO3.  So  usually what I need help with is someone to let me know if my characters do something out of character and just double check grammar and spelling.  Or general suggestions on a scene if you thought if I added something it could be better or expanded on.

crystallocks

@Jglh23 crystallocks  @Jglh23 Alright! just tell me when you are going to send them. 
            My email is elliotgrace122@gmail.com
            
            So, I'll just edit out the spelling errors(if present) and then send it you after going through the chapter, right?
            
            P.S. you can use the message option if you want to. That way it'll be more private. Right now, anyone can open up my profile and read our conversation.
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Jglh23

I so far have the next chapter ready for review by Wednesday and try to post Saturday.  I will try to work a chapter ahead to give you more time.  I use google docs to write and share.  I will most likely send you the entire rough draft just because it's easier for me to edit that way but only chapters 4 and 5 will be really ready to beta.  Of course you can read ahead if you want to see where the stories headed but there are a few major holes I need to go back and fill in.
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Jglh23

United States, midwest.
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swaggy_mama

Thank you for reading so much of my fanfic's!!! I apreciate itt alot!!

swaggy_mama

My fanfic's have well thank you and sorry to forcing you into unknown waters 
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swaggy_mama

@madzia_sweg MWHAHAHAH caus ei like making my characters be in pain -not litrally i actually live dem all- but i really can't remember why i made it i tho k i was into the gang and mafia stuff which most of m
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crystallocks

@madzia_sweg  No problem........ This is seriously a good fanfic. I usually don't read these types of angst fanfics, but it has given me an insight on how stockholm syndrome works........ I was curious as to how someone can fall in love with some person who hurt them badly. So now it makes a bit more sense to me than earlier.
            
            Also, jungkook is seriously messed up, like wtf!!! (no offense to you :) the fanfic is really well written)
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