HopelessRomanticPoo

Hi can u tell me what u think about the story in 5-6 lines…i am collecting reviews…please help me….

cunning_slytherin22

@HopelessRomanticPoo Didii i literally love your story. Your characters are so well written and even the relationships between them are very well described throughout the story. The struggles hridhu has to go through being darker skinned and the way karthik and her are always there for each other is just very very sweet! I just really hope Abhishek gets on the right track. Overall love the story and you 
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TwistAndTales

Hey, I've seen your YouTube comment on 
          https://youtube.com/shorts/B37lnqM3RzM?si=XMR9T9oviMjQiA5f
          @butterfly004
          
          I really had to come here to read the rest of the story....but say it was pretty good....
          
          I had even started to do this as well on my profile....just hadn't post it up as yet....
          
          Can't wait to see more of your works....

TwistAndTales

@cunning_slytherin22 
            Awww 
            Thanks sooo much!!!!
            Wait till you read the rest of the book!!!
            I assure you that you'll like it....
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cunning_slytherin22

@TwistAndTales gurl omgg i just read the first chapter and you are soo good at writingg i loveeeee ittttt✨️✨️✨️
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TwistAndTales

@cunning_slytherin22 
            Ofc I will 
            
            Btw, I've started writing a series 
            Whispers of the Veil...Book one is already out...book two is in progress.....would u mind checking it out please?....
            
            Would like to get some feedback for improvement...
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