November 2017 Development Report
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Chapter: Playing With Electricity
After months of work, determination, editing, and typing, I bring you a... 693 word chapter. A month of work, for a 693 word chapter... what happened?
Okay, here is the reason why the chapter is so short.
On October 29th, 2017, I made a post about how hard it was for me to create a chapter. Everytime I wrote, words would not flow properly. I never could write a chapter that made sense. Everything I wrote was garbage and ended up being deleted. During this time, I was extremely busy too. So, I didn't really have a lot of time to work on it. So, with 0 energy, 0 time, and 0 ideas I was stuck in a hole for months. One night, I was looking over the trash I had wrote and I read the first 4 paragraphs or so. It wasn't complete trash, it was decent at least. So then I got a great idea. Instead of writing a large chapter, I could write a small chapter first, just to give my readers something, and later I could make a longer and better chapter. So, I split the chapter into fourths and only kept the first 1/4. The other 3/4 would become a different chapter. This way I could focus on a smaller piece and make it good instead of writing a large piece and have the ideas and points not fit together.I rewrote the first part and gave it more details, descriptions, and made it longer. I think I did a pretty good job at giving the reader a mental picture of what the holo-projector looked like.
Speaking of descriptions, this is the part of the story where things will get described and things will start to make sense. I understand that my story isn't the best at describing and it gets confusing at times, but I will try to make better descriptions. After the next chapter or two, I will start introducing new characters and THAT is when the real story begins. As for more information about characters and storyline, you're just going to have to wait and see. ;)