elvinwrite

Author ek opinion du..? Thoda na likhne ka tarika apko fix krna chaiye, specific nhi ho pata hai ki bol kon raha hai, aur thoda kahi kahi pe grammar bhi mistakes ho Jate, dialogue sahi rehte hai bss wo perfectly emotions and sahi jagh fit baith nhi pa rahe hai

cutestsoulsamy07

@elvinwrite ahnn yes the first chapters wo mai ne shyd 2 years phle likhe thy so it have mistakes and wrong pronounciatio I'll rewrite it in correct form 
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elvinwrite

@elvinwrite ap dubara se padhna ok..
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elvinwrite

@cutestsoulsamy07 nhi pov toh alag hai Magar mei previous chapter ka bol rhi hu jaise — "aira kaha hai usse dar lgta hai" Ahan said something like that krke 
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AwriterArcane

Hello! I'm Arcane, and I'm excited to share that I'm working on my first novel titled "Fazal aur Noor ki Fehmiyan." It's in English, and I'm committed to giving it my all. I hope you all will enjoy it!
          
          The story features a best friends-to-lovers trope with a happy ending. It's also halal. If you're interested in reading it, please comment and vote. Thank you for your time!
          
          - Arcane
          
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MariumKhan111

Next part please 

cutestsoulsamy07

@MariumKhan111 I have posted the chapter you can read it 
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MariumKhan111

@MariumKhan111 10 baj rahy h konsi tonight pls tell me 
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cutestsoulsamy07

@MariumKhan111 tonight I will post it 
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