@JayxxDaniel
Hey!
I really am enjoying your story. Don't put past tense there. It's still updating and there's more to the story left. As a reader I feel you're doing just fine as compared to all other werewolf stories I've read. You're story is unique and I like the fact that the alpha male in this story ( Andrew ) is a human. Usually people go the other way round. I'm excited to know what his POV will be since we haven't had one from his side. I would like to know about his feelings that are going through his mind during all of this story. Like that's a personal opinion. There are other readers who enjoy things differently. I'm just voicing out mine since you were so polite to ask. Other than that I really love the concept, theme and characters of this story. It isn't too much of any of the emotions and geners that you mentioned. Yes there are a lot of mixed emotions but omegas were made to feel more loved and cared for so naturally there will be such emotions when his mate isn't responding to him the way he wants. There is really nothing else that I want you to do to improve this book. It's perfect the way it's going. Have confidence in yourself and write your mind out. Afterall that's what we all are here for to read and write and share. Keep good care of your family and your mental and physical health. That's all I guess!
Stay healthy, Stay safe, Stay at home!
Love,
Your supporter!!