Karnej
Hey,
I would just like to Point out that in your first chapter, i think you used exist instead of exit. Just thought I would let you know
Otherwise the story is cool, tough it's a little diffrent to what i'm used to.
cyberpunklover
Thank you!! I was inspired by a video game called cyberpunk 2077 and I’m basically altering the whole story as I go!
I love your book so far as well!
Karnej
@Karnej ohhh, yeah you can see i'm not familiar with that stuff. But I have to give you props you are one of the most original writters i had seen on here.
cyberpunklover
Hi! It’s supposed to be exist cause atm he’s just an engram in her brain;) thank u though that’s so sweet of you