@karmasucks I'm laughing. First off, babe if my comment was irrelevant, you wouldn't have replied. (: Secondly, you need to learn how to accept constructed criticism. I wasn't being rude at all, nor was it my intention to tell you off, I was simply giving my honest opinion and saying you should have been completely original starting from the first chapter, instead of basing it off dark to get readers, then inserting your own ideas as you went along. Thirdly, if you ask your readers to tell you what they think in all of your author's note, it's quite hypocritical to become defensive once I give you my two cents. Instead of getting hostile, you should accept my criticism. Every author gets critique and uses that to become a better writer. I will continue reading because obviously you have a lot of votes for a reason, and I want to see how it turns out. Also really good job on Narry Me. ✌️ Xx
