d1abloo

NEW CHAPTER DROPS AT 5 PM CEST <3333333

wtfanuh

Hey!! I'm looking for feedback and suggestions!
          
          I’m currently writing a coming-of-age small town fiction on Wattpad and I would really love some honest feedback and suggestions from fellow readers and writers here.
          I’ve already written several chapters and I’m now rewriting and strengthening the plot, characters, and pacing. I would love if some of you could read it and give constructive feedback on things like pacing and engagement, character depth, realism of dialogue and teen dynamics, emotional impact, overall plot direction. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/409217491?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=wtfanuh

wtfanuh

@wtfanuh thank you soo sooooo much!!!
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d1abloo

Hi! I’ve read the prelude and it’s amazing! you’re doing good. Keep up the good work<3333
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d1abloo

ARE Y’ALL THERE AND WANT ME TO DROP ANOTHER CHAPTER????

d1abloo

@missfrenchgirly I wasn’t sure if I shouldddduhhh
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missfrenchgirly

@d1abloo what happened to another chapter miss girl?? (≧▽≦)
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missfrenchgirly

it removed the raising hand emoji
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d1abloo

Chapter 4 is going to be up on 4:30 PM BABESSSS <3 don´t forget to comment, vote, and leave feedback <3333
          I´ll have updates every Sunday starting next week <3333
          Just wanted you guys to at least have a few chapters before I start the schedule <33333

missfrenchgirly

Okay here I thought you were brand new, lol
          
          I was just scrolling through your message board-what happened to your other stories (if you don't mind me asking)?
          
          Also, hello!!

d1abloo

hi ˙ᵕ˙ the other story was written in a heap and it has so many errors, doesn’t flow like i want it to and it overall in desperate need of some heavy editing. I’m working on rereleasing it! lol but I’ll probably discontinue it ˙ᵕ˙
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